“Crash! I hear glass shattering against the basement wall. I
know exactly what had happened before my hand even reaches for the basement
door. The creeks open, and I walk down the 19 steps I have faced way too many
times at 2 in the morning. Descending half way down, a putrid odor engulfs my
nostrils. Alcohol. I find my dad passed out on the floor. Blood was gushing
from his fresh battle scar on his index that was speckled with brown shards
from the pulverized beer bottle. Just another night at dad’s house I tell myself.
Just another night that he wanted to forget.”
My name is Caitlin and my dad is an alcoholic.
When you hear the word “drinking” what is the first thing
that comes to mind? Most people’s initial thoughts are partying and socializing,
or maybe you think of stupid, uncoordinated people. The ones that throw up in
the rose bushes and accidently drive over the trash can. These are all
consequences of drinking but most people don’t grasp the concept of how
hazardous drinking can truly be. You can hurt anyone around you, especially
yourself. Drinking causes:
·
Memory
loss
·
Impaired
vision
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Impaired
motor-skills
·
Irrational
thinking
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Mood
swings
·
Hangover
·
Liver
failure
·
Cancer
In my reality, the word “drinking” sparks memories of
violence, disappointment, misery, and betrayal. I feel like most people don’t
understand the full effects of drinking unless they are affected by their own
personal life experience. There’s a multitude of reasons that you shouldn’t
excessively drink.
#1: Alcohol is not
needed to “enhance” your lifestyle.
No one really needs alcohol to make his/her night better. That
person might not even remember that night to be honest. You can have as much or
more fun sober than you can wasted. Some people also think that if they drink
and forget about everything, that it’s a good thing. It’s not like you’re going
to wake up and all your problems are going to be gone though. They will still
be present the next day companied along with a massive hangover headache. You
end up in a worse than what you started at.
#2: Alcohol is
expensive.
Think of how much money you would spend on alcohol alone if
you drank on a regular basis? That’s a lot of cash that could be going to more
important things like bills and food.
#3: Alcohol has
terrible side effects.
Alcohol is a foreign substance that should not be consumed on
sight. It has some very vicious set backs such as the ones lists above. The
most extreme cases are that of liver cancer and alcohol poisoning. The liver
has to process and break down all the alcohol you drink. Therefore if you drink
a lot, the liver is put under a lot of pressure and stress to rid of this toxic
substance.
Drinking is acceptable at the right moments, as long as
you’re not getting obsessively drunk. You have to know when enough is enough
and you have to be of age to drink responsibly. Drinking is coined with the
terms fun and social, not anti-depressant medicine. Drowning yourself with alcoholic
beverages is not a suitable solution to your problem at hand.
Caitlin, the way you started off your blog was extremely shocking and really grabbed the reader's attention. The story was definitely my favorite part of your blog. That true story had a lot of emotional appeal that was followed up by the logical appeals of acoholic side effects. The material and problem you presented are a heavy topic, but you were able to write about it in a non-offensive way that made the reader feel your side of the story. Amazing job!
ReplyDeleteCaitlin, your blog was well-written, concise, and caused the reader to consider how alcohol affects other people. Your blog made the reader realize that we often think and are taught to think of alcohol in a less responsible way that we should, and our actions have negative consequences for one's body, social life, and family life. The logical appeals for the real effects of alcoholism and shocking story you began with really caught attention and kept the reader going. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is really good. It's really well-written. You have really good points, and really good word choice. I loved all of the emotional and logical appeals you included. You clearly care greatly about the subject, and it's reflected in your writing. It's really good.
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